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Post by Zoodle on Nov 15, 2007 17:02:46 GMT -5
I made someone cry with my mad writing skills/skillz! Me and ADT were doing one of our IMRPGs, and the main character's best friend died, so I wrote a semi-long scene of him dying. And it made him cry. So here it is, for your viewing pleasure:
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Nukem looks down at his stomach, and coughs, closing his eyes. Blood spurts from his mouth, and he holds his stomach tighter. He tells you to always remember your friendship, and never give up, even when you're mourning. He takes a deep breath, and his arm falls to his side. Nearly one year later, you're walking from his funeral. His necklace hangs from your neck, and his words ring in your mind. "Never give up." It feels like he's still saying those words in your ear. Like he's standing just behind you, whispering to you. You turn around, but he's gone. You see his tombstone. You had them write those words on it. "Never give up" You'd live your life by those words. You play with the necklace, looking at the ruby it holds. You close your eyes and whisper, "I'll never give up. I promise." And you won't. You swear to find a way to bring him back. And you know where to start: Kaile.
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Yeah, Kaile was an old man who was being possessed by the evil villain for the first half of the game, then spent the second half banished to an evil dimension known as "Hell". Yeah, those IMRPGs can get pretty complex.
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Post by Shmoie on Nov 15, 2007 20:37:53 GMT -5
Nice stuff yo! Welcome to the club!! <<gives you a t-shirt>> even though we don't actually wear them anymore XD
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Post by The Lawyer Pixie on Nov 16, 2007 1:09:32 GMT -5
Hey now, I wore mine just yesterday!
Welcome, little bro ^^
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adterminal
Sapling
Im sorry, it does that, here's a towel.
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Post by adterminal on Nov 16, 2007 10:49:28 GMT -5
You do know, I was lying to make you change the scene, why would I cry about something that corny?
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Post by Zoodle on Nov 16, 2007 17:18:44 GMT -5
Suuuure, whatever you say.
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