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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 28, 2009 17:49:32 GMT -5
OOC: I hope so too! ...wait where are you going?
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 27, 2009 22:41:35 GMT -5
I'm not sure how many of us are participating, but I thought we could discuss here. I know Hanna is doing this with me. I started early because Im going to be on an ATF tour for the last ten days of April, so I figured five extra days isn't actually cheating. Anyways I thought it would be fun to be able to post excerpts and talk about our problems and ... procrastinate together. Anyways, is anyone interested in some discussion? Cuz I am.
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 27, 2009 11:30:10 GMT -5
INT. FRANK's ROOM - EARLY MORNING
Kate enters towling her hair and stops in the doorway. The camera pans around and we see Frank, lounged across the bed surrounded by several plates, some of which are still half covered and a couple of empty drink bottles. She stands there and looks disgusted for a minute, and throws the towel at his face, turning to leave as he startsa awake,
KATE: I'm going down for breakfast. You can join me...if you must.
Kate walks down the stairs and enters the lower protion of the inn. Caprice and Giacomo are seated at a corner table, we overhear:
Caprice: (a pause) ... I've heard it works on dogs. Giacomo: Just... be quiet. Caprice: (follows the waitress with her eyes) (brightly) I hope it's eggs and toast.
Kate shakes her head at them, the waitress comes over to her,
WAITRESS: What will you be having miss? KATE: Something simple... WAITRESS: Not much like your man are you? KATE: (a flash of anger and disgust at the idea of Frank being "her man" and then) What do you mean? WAITRESS: He ordered half our supply last night.
Frank is seen at the top of the stairs, Kate shoots him a glare.
KATE: Well, I'll just have a plate of whatever your serving this morning, Id hate to be a bother.
Waitress sees Frank as he comes toward the table,
WAITRESS: And what'll he be having? KATE: He'll have the same. I do apologize for him last night. WAITRESS: Don't you worry miss. I'll be back with your plates.
The waitress and Kate both give Frank dirty looks as he sits.
FRANK: So, what are we having? KATE: (watching Caprice and Giacomo) Something simple, shatever their serving. FRANK: (disapointed) I thought so, what are you looking at? KATE: An interesting pair in the corner.
Caprice and Giacomo are engaged in an interesting conversation, Caprice attempting to get Giacomo to try using the compass.
FRANK: They look familiar. KATE: They are. We robbed them the other night. FRANK: I thought so. KATE: What are they doing? FRANK: I think shes trying to teach him the use of a compass.
Giacomo looks over and sees how much atttention they're paying them and attempts to hush Caprice. The waitress comes out with their food. It looks like a pretty standard breakfast, porridge, eggs, toast, and as unidentified breakfast meat (just to keep things interesting)
Kate and Frank tuck in, not speaking but listening to Caprice and Giacomo. Mostly all they hear is Giacomo shushing her, until CAprice is finally tired of it and states a bit too loudly:
CAPRICE: You know you're going to have to learn to use this compass someday Giacomo or we'll never find the -
Very rapidl Action sequence here: Giacomo claps his hand over her mouth Kate and Frank drop their forks and stand in unison Caprice and Giacomo stand, hand still over mouth All four briefly make ey contact. Camera flashes to Compass, then rod. Caprice starts forward, Giacomo pulls her back. Perfect stillness...
Caprice and Giacomo turn and run out the door, Kate and Frank look at each other, nod, and run out after them.
OOC: There you go, have some action...I hope you enjoy!
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 24, 2009 18:40:59 GMT -5
Im not Abby but I think you got Mack down pretty well. I love the thinking too much to feel line. Classic Mack. Keep it up guys! Three down Three to go! Then we can write the rest!
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 24, 2009 18:35:39 GMT -5
OOC: I love it too, go team go.
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 22, 2009 17:09:09 GMT -5
OOC: Sorry for my tardiness in posting guys, I'll get to it, I just haven't had much time lately. I'm a very busy woman.
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 22, 2009 17:03:26 GMT -5
OOC: I agree...but I don't know what the job is...and I spoke too recently.
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 19, 2009 7:31:43 GMT -5
Does it make me a bad person that I absolutely love it? I think it does, but I'm OK with that...
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 18, 2009 13:46:25 GMT -5
Nate: <<in response to Jae>> Oh no, whatever will we do without our fearless leader?
Molly: We aren't imagining mom. We went there remeber.
Tucker: We went then Molly.
Molly There!
Tucker: Then!
OOC: Just imagine that continuing...
Max: Don't mind them, kids and their imaginations. <<Grabbing their hands and pulling them away a bit>> Come on you two, lets let the nice girls build their castle...
OOC: Look at him being a cute dad!
Star: Strange family...
Missy: You're telling me.
Deuce: <<Glares over glasses and removes her hand from the lap top>> I. Don't. Do. Boats.
Lio: Really? I had a friend once who wasn't so fond of the water <<glances toward Nox>> We fixed that problem nice and easy...perhaps I could help you conquer that little fear.
Deuce: <<loses all resolve, but doesn't move an inch>>
OOC: I am very worried for his physical well being right now...
Zeke: Sandier? I'm not so sure if thats a pro, <<shakes some out of his shoe>> or a con. But I suppose ther is more room to walk. <<Offers his arm>>
Castille: Right, rises from the ashes.
Rika: Its a very handy tactical maneuver
Castille: Have you considered not letting your ship sink?
Rika: Plenty of times, and usually I don't, but you see it always comes back with cargo, and sometimes with extra from the sea floor.
OOC: See she is a decent captain.
Charles: <<Starts to follow her, sees Rafe and Kedar, stops, rolls his eyes and surveys the rest of the females present, and strolls toward the gathering crowd of characters>>
OOC: You might get somewhere if you weren't constantly resigned to failure.
Charles: <<Eyeing Joy ad Charnette>> I'm keeping my options open.
OOC: No, now you're being stupid.
Jimmy: <<Singing along, editing the lyrics slightly to fit>> I used to be so wise, That was a long time ago, now I'm to far in love to hear...
Both: Its all goin in one ear and out the other.
OOC: Sorry for the steal Zobo, it was too cute for me to resist!
Kate: <<Looks at Frank>> You are perfectly capable of handling yourself. <<Runs toward boat>> Hey! Room for one more?
OOC: Apparently this is a rather largish boat...
James: <<watching Joy and Charnette coming toward him and smiling slightly>> I assure you I am not in need of rescuing. <<He starts walking in the opposite direction>>
OOC: Oh my heck that took forever. Why do we do this to ourselves?
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 14, 2009 19:59:50 GMT -5
Well, just because Justin won't be around to play him doesn't mean we have to get rid of the character. We can change his name if y'all want to, but I'm fine with just keeping him.
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 13, 2009 14:04:41 GMT -5
ell, I'm planning on splicing things in and editing the interviews a touch, so they play out like in Firefly, I can't remember the episode title right now...So the order doesn't matter too much. They're all being done seperately, and I had invisioned that they're all done at the same time with different scientists, and Mack is going back and forth between the rooms...I know that isn't how we did it, but since we're writing it, and so far from when we did do it, I think those things can change around a bit...So, what I'm saying is for the interviews at least, post yours when you can. Then we can set up an official order when we start writing the rest of it. If thats alright with you guys...
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 11, 2009 22:02:14 GMT -5
DEUCE: (to Boss) I don't do boats. Its in our original agreement as partners, and you've already broken it three times.
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 11, 2009 22:00:39 GMT -5
You guys are stressing my life out with all this not remembering...not really, I'm just being melodramatic, but really...come on guys.
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 11, 2009 12:12:23 GMT -5
DEUCE: (Very serious, but without looking away from his lap top) I. Don't. Do. Boats.
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Post by gandalfthesparkly on Mar 11, 2009 12:10:06 GMT -5
(The rod only does space travel, I refuse to bring time travel into this one. So, just to the next town, or mabes their secret -currently undetermined- hideout...whichever Christine should choose, as she'll post their next bit (I'm open to whichever) but yes, we are only traveling through space, we're getting dangerously close to sci-fi as it is.)
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